Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by photo gal, Mar 31, 2006.
Thanks for lookin' : )
This is my fav of the whole series!
It's a little flat, but the composition, at least for me, is dead on
I like the expression of the girl that is looking to her right.
I really really like the subject matter/composition/cropping. Where do you keep finding such pretty models? (hey, the guys were wondering, so I figured I might as well ask)
I'm not really in a position to offer critique, so can I just ask if it's distracting for there to be the white spots of light on the whites of the eyes of the girl on the right?
Great comp but I have to agree with woodsac its a little flat of course it could be the upload. Suggest a little more brightness. --Lenny
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