Scattered!

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  1. ClarkKent

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    Was playing around with my new toy and thought that I came up with an interesting composite. What do you guys think. All comments and Critisizm welcome.

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    pretty cool creation. personally, i think this is an image where the rule of thirds could be broken. the heavy cloned area is somewhat a distraction though.

    what toy did you purchase to help enable you to get this?
     
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    I like the subject and also the end result. I would say maybe try a couple of breaks and see if you can't get a more even spread of streaks. Otherwise I like it.
     

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