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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by ztriola, Jul 18, 2009.

  1. ztriola

    ztriola TPF Noob!

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    my dad - i am undecided about the desaturation, but besides that let me know what you think.


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    I like this a lot..The desaturation is good, but maybe not as extreme as you have it here? try brightening it overall too.
     
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    Just a thought here, so take it with a very large gran of salt.

    I like the concept, but IMO the background is the killer. I think if you were to try this again, I'd really like to see gas pumps in the background, the ciggy in the corner of his mouth and a 40 in his lap. Have some motion blur on his right hand (as in frantically hoping for a winner) and an officer/GF/anyone in the side mirror. Also, take a half step to your right to get moer of his face/expression prominent. Kudos anyway.
     
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    wow i really appreciate you breaking it down like this. i definitely wanna do a reshoot, and now i know how.
     
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    more saturated/bump
     

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