Trenton Romulox
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I was just perusing my finder on my notebook and found this poem that I wrote last fall. I don't have a lot of poetry, so I figured I'd share some of what I have. So, here it is, critique if you want, I certainly don't mind.
Second Mind:
Last night,
Quite a night,
I saw the light,
Spoke to her second mind.
In her second mind,
What did I find?
Love so pure its blind.
Love so strong it binds.
Secrets so secret,
Theyre one of a kind.
Knowledge attained,
Shes one of a kind.
Im more in love than before,
Im more sure than ever before
All because,
I spoke to her second mind.
Second Mind:
Last night,
Quite a night,
I saw the light,
Spoke to her second mind.
In her second mind,
What did I find?
Love so pure its blind.
Love so strong it binds.
Secrets so secret,
Theyre one of a kind.
Knowledge attained,
Shes one of a kind.
Im more in love than before,
Im more sure than ever before
All because,
I spoke to her second mind.