Several recent pictures (not quite beginner) C&C please

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  1. Deksel

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    Some neat lighting and symmetry, but not the most interesting shots I've seen....
     
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    I like the ideas here. In #1 I'd like to see a little more detail at the top of the escalator. In #2, I'd suggest cropping so that the side walls are removed. #3, I don't have any suggestions.
     
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    Some nice shots here. I actually like the lack of detail in the black at the top of one, I reckon it's my favourite. You've got a good eye for line.
     
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    The mood of the pics is dark & depressing to me. There is some redemption in the last photo.
     
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    the only one i like is the escalator one. I had trouble knowing exactly what I was looking at in a few...and some of them aren't very interesting subject matter.
     
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    In the first group, the hooded guy needs to be superimposed in the escalator shot.:D

    I like the tonal range you got in the second group of b&w's.
     
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    I really like the one with the reflecting on the rear window of the car!
     

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