Hi all! This is my first post here; I'm trying to improve my skills beyond point & click and would appreciate some feedback. I did these shots using the b/w setting on my camera - is it better to do that or use photo editing software to change a color picture to b/w? I tried messing around with that in gimp for a while and it proved to be somewhat difficult, but I'm not impressed with this version of b/w either. Anyway, any suggestions for improvement are welcome!! This one seems... busy. I don't know. I like it, but something is bugging me: The exposure on this one looks a bit high, but I couldn't fix it in gimp: I was trying to play around with the lines but something about the composure just looks "off" to me... any guidance? thank you!!