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  1. Josay

    Josay TPF Noob!

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    here some random shots that i would like some critique on TPF!

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  2. adversus

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    #1: I like, would be nice to see some more definition in the sky, though
    #2: Very nice, I like it. Best one of the lot.
    #3: Doesn't do much. Maybe if I saw the whole picture (or whatever) is hanging on the wall. The conflicting angles makes me unsure if I should tilt my head or not.
    #4: This confuses me
     
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    The top two aren't too bad, actually. The 3rd one just seems, well, I'm at a loss to say what it seems. Bland, maybe? The last one is a nice idea but there's a lot of clutter around her that distracts.
     
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    #2 it would be better with more color in the sky but very good I like it.
     
  5. Josay

    Josay TPF Noob!

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    the 4th one is more of a concept, feeling ugly on the inside
     
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    Josay TPF Noob!

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    yeah i wish i had more detail in the sky also but being back lit it would have been hard so i decided to get the detail in the restaurant
    thanks for the comments and critique everyone!
     
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    I really like the second one!
     

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