Some pics of the girlfriend C&C please

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  1. shortpballer

    shortpballer TPF Noob!

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    As always comments and critiques welcome and encouraged.
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  2. reznap

    reznap No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    You're way past my level and I see nothing wrong with any of them.

    What I like especially are her eyes' catch lights, especially in 2 and 3. In 1 it's a bit unnatural but with the unorthodox hairstyle and makeup it works.

    I think you did great with the lighting and the focus and... damn I just read your gearlist... badass...
     
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    They look great.
     
  4. adversus

    adversus TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    From a technical standpoint, I can't offer much, they look great.

    From a composition standpoint, I'm not a fan of the makeup. She's a beautiful woman, the purple is really distracting :(
     
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    I have to agree here. When I saw the first picture, my first thought was why does she have two black eyes? Different color makeup would be much better.
     
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    Pretty decent work for a 'fashion' look. My one pet peeve seeing these is if there's an earring hole, either drop an earring in it or shop it out.
     
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    Great photos...I do agree about the makeup being a bit distracting, however.
     
  8. Dominantly

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    I enjoy them, I find the makeup works well.
    I do agree though that the ear hole should be PS out.

    Hot GF who doesnt mind posing is probably a great benefit.
     
  9. JeffieLove

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    I agree that they look awesome :)

    You should probably put an NSFW in the title though ;)
     
  10. Tulsa

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    I think these belong in the People section, possibly the NSFW section.
    These are not beginner shots.
     
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    I hate to sound like everyone else, but these are great with the exception of the make-up. Would you and your girlfriend consider posting a facial portrait without make-up for comparison? If that is considered a request in bad taste, I apologize. I prefer no make-up on all but 3 people I have ever met.
     
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    totally agree, also may i comment, your girlfriend is gorgeous.

    Secondly you say you're new to photography, pssssh how new?
     

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