Some poetry... "Half a thousand days"

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  1. [JR]

    [JR] TPF Noob!

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    Never been much of a poet... never even wanted to write them. Times change and so do we. I'm not going to explain why I wrote this poem, I think it's pretty clear where I'm coming from if you take the time to read it.

    I look into your eyes, pulled by your delicious stare
    I see the smile on your beautiful face today
    I feel my heart melt in your company
    It’s just like falling in love all over again


    Half a thousand days before you can be in my arms
    Before I can wipe the tears off your cheeks
    Before I can kiss your soft lips
    Until I can hold you, love you, breathe you


    [FONT=&quot]Promises are ties that bind, crossed my heart to never give up
    I put my hand on my heart when I say I love you
    Half a thousand days to love you more than the last
    Forever together with you isn’t enough time


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    [FONT=&quot]So yeah, that was my Valentine's day. Cheers.
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    Sweet...:heart: poem.

    Nice one, good emotion, energy and I liked your format very much.
    Kudos.
     
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    Thank you carly. I didn't think anyone would take notice. :p
     

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