Some recent bridals

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  1. Deadeye008

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    Here are a few(4) shots of some bridals I did last summer for a friend. I still consider myself in the learning stage so let me know what you think. Enjoy
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  2. JimmyJaceyMom

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    I love the colors,, very pretty!
     
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    Very nice dreamy effect. In #3, the shadow on her face is too dark. I would expose for her face or use a fill flash or reflector. Great color in #4, but the building is tilted forward, yet she is standing straight...maybe the angle you are shooting at? Overall, very good! :D
     
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    Good work, though a few I would make made a bit more off centered. Love the colors in the last one, and the dreamy effect in the first.
     
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    Thanks for all the compliments and suggestions. It's funny how you don't notice things until they are pointed out to you...
     
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    I think #1 looks way too over-processed #2 is nice #3 is very nice but could have used alot more light on her face #4 is very nice I like that one alot.
     
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    #1 is overprocessed, but a nice shot....back off on the processing and just do a little burn to the thing coming out of her head to take away its 'presence' in the photo

    #2 pretty shot...needs to be a bit brighter

    $3 needs fill flash or reflector...or could have faced her into the light..

    #4 very pretty all around...though the angle of the building is distracting

    otherwise...good job, you have an eye, just the little things that need improving
     
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    Pretty much exactly what Kim says. 4 looks the nicest but straighten the image first.
     

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