Somw new shots from today - C&C please

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Rushfan67, Apr 18, 2008.

  1. Rushfan67

    Rushfan67 TPF Noob!

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    Here are a couple of shots from today I took, still trying to get used to the new D80. Please let me know your thoughts, thanks.

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    Not bad, good exposures and all pretty sound technically.

    Out of the three the second hold the most interest for me. Unusual viewpoint and circular slide makes for some interesting framing of the other slide.

    On the negitive, your composition is lacking as you have centered the points of interest in each shot. Maybe consider the rule of thirds a little more next time.

    The final image is a little cluttered, too much happening to hold any interest!

    P.S I'm not one for sticking to the rules all the time but, we need to know how to apply them before we can break them!
     

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