Spread My Wings

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  1. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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  2. hobbes28

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    I really like this one Mentos. The only thing I would like to see different is if the other bird in the distance wasn't there or was cloned out. To me, it's distracting. Still, very nice work. :D
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    thanks Hobbes :) It was really hard to get rid of all birdies there :) but I'll try to "remove" it from the shot :)
     
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    very nice shot there! i'm gunna have to agree with the hobbster on this one too...i'd probably prefer it without the other bird in there
     
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    Good Capture! I am not sure if the picture is better with the second bird or not? It is almost as if the bird on the upper right draws the eyes to the smaller bird.
     
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    nice close-up on this gull. is it my eyes or is there a red band or something around the leg????
     
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    It looks like the bird is looking at me!
     
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    I see that band too, I was trying to figure out why they would be banding seagulls?
     
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    Nice shot Mentos.
     
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    NICE!
     
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    I like it! A gliding bird is always a cool photo.
     
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    Nice capture. I'll vote for leaving the second bird in the shot. I think it gives the picture more depth.
     

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