Studio Shoot 20 May 2004

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  1. Bobman

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    Please comments and give suggestions.....Thanks

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    I like the first one better. I think the clear, almost harsh lighting works well with it. In the 2nd, the shadows are too harsh and the pose looks kind of stilted and forced.
     
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    On the 1st one, I like the way the light accentuates and compliments the shape of the nose. I like the catch light.

    I don't care for the model's expression and the tension that the pose expresses.

    I'm not a fan of single-source and/or high-ratio lighting. The light ratio seems to be around 1:4. I would have liked it better with 1:1.5 or 1:3 ratio.

    On the 2nd shot, the lifeless eyes are its worst offender.

    Overall, I think the model is probably more beautiful than the shots imply.
     
  4. Bobman

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    Besides the hot spots, what else you think I need to rectify?

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    Ok canonrebel, will try 3 light source next time. Still in learning stage with single light source. Be patience ok, will post soon :)
     

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