Studio Shoot 20 May 2004

[Bobman]

Please comments and give suggestions.....Thanks

 

[Sharkbait]

I like the first one better. I think the clear, almost harsh lighting works well with it. In the 2nd, the shadows are too harsh and the pose looks kind of stilted and forced.

 

[canonrebel]

On the 1st one, I like the way the light accentuates and compliments the shape of the nose. I like the catch light.

I don't care for the model's expression and the tension that the pose expresses.

I'm not a fan of single-source and/or high-ratio lighting. The light ratio seems to be around 1:4. I would have liked it better with 1:1.5 or 1:3 ratio.

On the 2nd shot, the lifeless eyes are its worst offender.

Overall, I think the model is probably more beautiful than the shots imply.

 

[Bobman]

Besides the hot spots, what else you think I need to rectify?

 

[Bobman]

On the 1st one, I like the way the light accentuates and compliments the shape of the nose. I like the catch light.

I don't care for the model's expression and the tension that the pose expresses.

I'm not a fan of single-source and/or high-ratio lighting. The light ratio seems to be around 1:4. I would have liked it better with 1:1.5 or 1:3 ratio.

On the 2nd shot, the lifeless eyes are its worst offender.

Overall, I think the model is probably more beautiful than the shots imply.

Ok canonrebel, will try 3 light source next time. Still in learning stage with single light source. Be patience ok, will post soon