Sunset sail in Key West

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  1. marinaw

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    Hi, everyone. I've made a few posts but these are the first photos I've posted. Please let me know what you think. I'm here to learn so any constructive criticism will be very much appreciated.

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    Marina

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  2. Peter_pan91

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    I like the second one, nice colors, thought i think the horizen is a little tilted and it would be nice if the boats could have a little more light . In the first , everything seems to be on the right, i tried cropping it just to show you how it could be :).

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    Just my opinion thought.
     
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    Thanks for your comments. Unfortunately, I was not able to see your crop, though.
     
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    oh sorry, here it is :)

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    I think I agree that I like the cropped version better.
     
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    The cropped version looks much better. Thank you for the suggestion!
     

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