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  1. Chris FL

    Chris FL TPF Noob!

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    Opinions on what could help this shot?

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  2. hobbes28

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    Maybe a crop to bring the horizon down in the frame. Nice shot.
     
  3. Digital Matt

    Digital Matt alter ego: Analog Matt

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    Try and bring out the detail in the foreground with a levels and curves adjustment. I would probably have gotten more sky with this shot and left more of that foreground out.
     
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    J.A.S.P ?? :p
    I'd try to grop the bottom. But even though I like it
     
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    I'd crop a bit of the bottom, too much of that black IMO.
     
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    I agree with the others in that I think you should crop a bit off of the bottom just to bring the horizon down a little. Otherwise, this is a great shot!
    It looks like a postcard! Nice work! :thumbsup:
     
  7. Chris FL

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    Thanks for the compliments, I really like this shot. It was from the porch of the place I stayed this weekend.. kind of a hurried chance shot that I figured wouldn't come out.

    Glad it did. :)
     
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    Isn't it funny how it always seems to work out that way? Some of my best shots that I love, I didn't think would be very good...on the other hand, most of the photos that I get excited about don't turn out that great. :sigh:
     

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