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Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by ClarkKent, Apr 7, 2005.

  1. ClarkKent

    ClarkKent TPF Noob!

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    This is from the same group of captures from the fire...and was wanting some Constuctive Critizism. I thought it was kinda neat, and was just trying night photography.

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    the exposure in this shot looks ok... maybe a touch overexposed, but barely if any.

    i would have preferred to see more wheels of the truck and less of the distracting tree branches, also i'd probably crop out the guy on the left that is only partially in the pic. if possible, i'd clone out those branches that you can't crop out.

    otherwise, i think it's pretty good composition
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Ah, back to the fire - must have been a huge one. Was it?

    Well, I agree: exposure is a lot better in this one, the red twigs are distracting though, and once more I miss some part at the bottom of the photo. The wheels are almost there in this one, but it would have been nicer to see them all.

    This one is better than the other.
     
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    Excellent! I am really groov'n on the ladder going to the sky. The lights at the top of the subject add a strong bonus to the frame. I think the red branches cut an otherwise flat sky. The exposure is on point, so spill all the gory lighting details.
     

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