thirdkid's Folio

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  1. thirdkid

    thirdkid TPF Noob!

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    Look, see and critique.. Negative critiquing welcome

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    i like the one of the heart the best
     
  3. thirdkid

    thirdkid TPF Noob!

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    thanks for that..yeah i gave that photo to my GF as a present..quite cool how such a small thing can make someone happy..
     
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    i like the heart too..nice one
     
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    thirdkid TPF Noob!

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    okay heres an udpate..check these car shoot i did..

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    Wozza TPF Noob!

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    Thats a really nice EK Civic. Are you using this as a portfolio? If so is that how you want the critique?
     
  7. thirdkid

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    dont really mind how the photos get critiqued..as long as you have an opinion then post it up..and yeah my folio so i can get some judgement on the photos i take
     
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    Robert Scott Photography TPF Noob!

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    From your first post, photos 2, 3 and 4 are the good ones, IMO.

    The first one seems to be off in composition. I have to imagine that the left of the photograph was your main subject. I would have done more to show this and the people standing around. The tree on the right hand side is more of a distraction than a piece of the composition.

    Your floral photo is great, has nice clarity and DOF!

    The monument photograph I actually had to put on a grid to see if it was straight, and found that it is. Maybe some kind of optical illusion, but when I turn off the grid, it looks like it's leaning to the left.

    The locket photo is my favorite of them all! The only thing i would have done differently would have been to use a not so shallow DOF so that the chain wasn't so blurry in the foreground.

    The last one, neither good nor bad in my opinion, is a fairly typical photograph. Try putting something in the foreground of your photos like this, or finding a interesting horizon line that adds something to the photograph. I'd also move the horizon line up to the 1/3 mark or around there.

    Hope this helps, and remember these are only my opinion, someone else may come and say the complete opposite!
     
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    thirdkid TPF Noob!

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    Its been awhile since i posted so heres a few recent ones ive taken

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    Heres a few car shoots ive done recently..

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    fokker No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Hey, where is this? I'm pretty sure I've been there...
     

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