Train in front of creepy dog food factory

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  1. Treymac

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    Hey guys. I was out taking pictures in front of the old dog food factory thats in my city. This is one of the train that sits in front of it. C&C, please.

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    The sunset in the picture is great, but personally, I can't really see the train all that much. Maybe if it was lightened up just a bit it would work better. :)
     
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    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    Good idea but I'm not sure that it's working the way it's supposed to. It might be a bit TOO dark--and is that the dog food factory on the left side? I think there's too much going on in this picture.
     
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    The factory is actually on the right of the picture. I agree, after getting used to it, it is definitely too dark. I've fixed the lighting, and did a little editing to it as well. I think this is better. I would really appreciate feedback, I'm not sure if I should use this one for my final portfolio in 2 days.

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    Much better!
     
  6. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The edit was sorely needed, the original pic was way too dark, worse even since the train was supposed to be the subject. The sunset lights it nicely!
    It has a good many "vanishing" elements to it - powerlines, road, train - but I am not sure I would take this for a really "strong" photo ... :scratch:
     
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    thats a lot of dog food to fill a train.

    the edit is a lot better than the original
     

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