Twisty Trail

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  1. Joerocket

    Joerocket TPF Noob!

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    This the back yard of the old folks home down the street from my apartments, wish those damn trees wern't blocking the bench...

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    Thanks for looking!

    -Joe
     
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    It looks out of focus. Also maybe try squating down to get the branches out of the way next time. Good concept and I hope you go back a try a few different approches. Good job.
     
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    Yea it is a little out of focus, my batteries were dieing so i had to shutoff the display, so i had to have it in auto mode and it was a little dark. I wish I could have taken it from a lower angle but I was right up against a thick fence so that was the only angle I could take it from. Thank you very much for your comments and critique!

    -Joe
     
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    I love the comp and the way the path just leads you through the shot but the branches are distracting.

    Great effort though :thumbsup:
     
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    alright, leave it to me to be different...but i like it just like it is...
    dark..the trail is so neat looking..the snow placed around... and the bench with the branches...kinda says, hey sit down, but at your own risk...

    i like it, and the black and white makes it stark.... i think its really creative.
     

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