Two of my four year old...

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  1. BeansproutsPhoto

    BeansproutsPhoto TPF Noob!

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    Thoughts on how I might improve them?

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    noob myself, so, get your grain of salt out :)
    I like the right one better. The left one is way over exposed and looks strangely two dimensional - her nose and eyebrows melt into her face!
    The right one is very sweet, you can see her freckles, nose, eyebrows - all of the details that were blown out in the left one.
     
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    I agree with Raizels, also the one on the left looks like a forced smile and makes it a bit less appealing. The right picture is significantly better than the left.
     
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    No improvement necessary! But if I have to make suggestions: the background in #2 may be too in-focus; try giving her something to do - like catch her looking up from working on a coloring book, or baking cookies.
     
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    Thank you all! :) Maybe I'll post some more. I'm still a little intimidated!
     

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