Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by SpeedTrap, Dec 9, 2006.
Let me kow what you think, how can I improve this shot
I really really like this photo. The only thing I would add is maybe have someone walking down that path and shoot it as the sunlight is shining on them. But this is nice as is.
The column on the left is distracting. Tell us why you included it in the photo. Other then that I like the light and the lines.
My immediated thought is: that bike should have been closer. Maybe if you had let go of that nearest column and had moved those couple of steps closer to the bike, changing your POV to a lot lower at the same time ... I think that would have given this photo a lot more impact.
I like this shot although, I found myself looking for a subject.
The bike is too far to the left and too far away to have been the subject
I think if you crop out the beam closest to the left and some of the tree line on the right it would increase the interest in this shot
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