Walking...

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  1. noescape

    noescape TPF Noob!

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    Hi... Need as many opinons on this as possible... So post whatever you think. ;)

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    Oh well, my immediate thought is that I personally don't like the vignetting AT ALL. But that is soooo subjective. It should not bother you in the least.
    Other than that I like the way you composed the path to the right of this photo, how it vanishes in the distance - and ... the corn is still so low, it must have been taken earlier in this year, or wasn't it? (Here the harvesters are about all over the place, harvesting the corn!).
     
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    Ahhh okay. Yep, that was just an experiment... Not sure if I like it, either.

    That was taken in July...

    Thanks!
     
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    vignetting is uneven and other then taht its an all around good picture and i couldnt think of anything to change
     
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    Okay yea, I can see what you mean by that also. I used the burn brush in an awful hurry. lol!!!! Thanks :)
     
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    I actually like the vignetting, but its a little overdone, which has already been mentioned. But I think it could still be effective using a different method.

    The composition is really nice, but 2 things stand out adversely. 1) the sunlight is causing some bright spots and blowout on their clothes, and 2) their heads are blending into the dark background too much.

    I think if the lighting was softer, and the subjects were lit a little better, this would be a cracker! :) Just my 2 cents.

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    His head, in particular, needs to stand out more.
     
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    To me I think it would work better if it was more from the couples perspective, like the shot taken 6 paces to the left, so we see the road unfolding in front of them. Plus maybe around evening or early morning. My $.02

    Great concept.
     
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    Okay thanks a lot everyone!

    This was a candid, BTW... I was walking behind them and they kept moving all over the road- lol! anyway.

    Yep I noticed that the guy doesn't really have a head... haha

    Thanks for the critique- I will be doing better next time!
     

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