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Discussion in 'Nature & Wildlife' started by Kengraphy, Nov 16, 2008.

  1. Kengraphy

    Kengraphy TPF Noob!

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    Done for college assignment. C&Cs are welcomed!

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    The first I think lacks something - not quite sure what, I think its because the water drop have nothing special to it - I like the idea though.

    The second I will admit I really really like! Its composition and lighting really appeal to me. If I were to be critical I a would say that the far petal is a little too overexposed and some of the finer details present in the others is lost. Almost looks like something one would expect to see in Final Fantasy CGI.
     
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    Frankly speakin the first one was more or less a failed attempt, I was trying to get the flower in the bg to appear in the droplet. =(

    Thanks, the overexposure was more or less on purpose, I was trying to go for that heavenly feel, and with the right exposure my white flower would turn gray. xD

    Yes, details-wise I guess it can't really be helped, I took alot of shots and it all ended up like that, should be cause of the really really shallow DOF. I was using a 70~300mm macro lens, at 300mm with f5.6 and shutter of 1/8.

    I can't think of any other explaination, I should have shot at a slightly higher aperture. >.>

    Thanks for the C&Cs! =)
     

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