14 year old asked for feedback on these.

[hokies2379]

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[peterogof]

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[Designer]

1. She missed the frame, in my opinion. She should frame the flowers, never mind the bee. If the subject was mainly three flowers with "oh, look, a bee!", then she would have something.

2. & 3. both framed too tightly, IMO.

 

[vintagesnaps]

I'd say that it would help to work on learning how to frame shots. I think people tend to look at the subject and aren't always seeing what's in the corners and the whole picture - it's necessary for a photographer to start learning how to see everything in the frame.

I'd suggest also thinking about the vantage point. The second one might have been more effective from a different angle so it would be more noticeable that the cat's licking (and so the ceiling light isn't in the backgroud). Notice backgrounds too and think about how that will look behind and around the subject.

The last one would be nicer if it wasn't in quite so close. I think that was seeing an interesting moment when the cat's doing something.

It takes liking photography enough to keep learning and practicing; it takes time and practice to get good at something.

 

[ZombiesniperJr]

I like the third one out of this set Because the first one it looks a bit out of focus to me and the second one it looks to be focused on the cats chin the third one is the one that has the eye the most in focus but it is still not focused dirrectly on the eye it is focused on the nose by the looks of it. are they newer to photography or have they been doing it for a couple of years?

 

[hokies2379]

I like the third one out of this set Because the first one it looks a bit out of focus to me and the second one it looks to be focused on the cats chin the third one is the one that has the eye the most in focus but it is still not focused dirrectly on the eye it is focused on the nose by the looks of it. are they newer to photography or have they been doing it for a couple of years?

Couple months.


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