The shots are mainly too tight. #5 will never be used by the main photographer. It just look like they are posing for someone else next to you. I suggest next time take it from a completely different angle so it looks like they are looking away instead of posing for someone next to you. Does that make sense? I hate it when my 2nd shooter gives me a bunch of photos like #5. It goes straight to the trash can.
#5 is the only shot I took of one of the posed moments, for exactly that reason. There's no way the main photographer is going to take my image over their own, especially since I've seen his now, and damn... Yeah. He doesn't need my version.
#2 & #3 I was kinda stuck with, compositionally. I was shooting from a 2nd floor window overlooking the courtyard. Not much I could do with camera angle and I had background issues along the full length of the approach. I was trying to pick the lesser of evils.
#1 & #4 are completely deliberate. I had full opportunity to move, change angle, re-frame, etc. I'll take credit for the good and bad in full, lol
#6 happened fast. I wanted to get that damned chair out of the shot, but when I moved to do so I couldn't see her eyes, and I knew she wasn't going to stay there long. Like all but #5, this is a candid, and I like shooting that way.
Thanks for all the feedback so far. Definitely keeps me thinking!