2nd try.. C&C please

[derrick937]

Better ?

1.
Untitled by derrick937, on Flickr

2.
Untitled by derrick937, on Flickr

1 was first try 2 is redo..

 

[MReid]

I like 1, with just a bit less vignette it would be a cool shot.

 

[KmH]

i don't care for the vignette in #1, while I do like the frame treatment in #2.

I recommend editing out the Flickr SPAM at the bottom of each photo.

 

[punch]

i don't care for the vignette in #1, while I do like the frame treatment in #2.

I recommend editing out the Flickr SPAM at the bottom of each photo.

What are you referring to when you say that? Something you're seeing on the flickr page, or the title/author below the picture in the thread itself?

 

[MTVision]

What are you referring to when you say that? Something you're seeing on the flickr page, or the title/author below the picture in the thread itself?

I think the title and author link underneath.