3 Photos for C&C please

[Airborne_Guy]

These were taken for my photog class last semester.
The first two were a lighting assignment and the last one was at the railroad yard with my kiddo.
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2.

3.

Thank you!

 

[Leftyplayer]

I like the second one, though the vignette feels a bit much. The third one makes me feel like there was the possibility of a great shot, but it's not quite there. There are so many interesting things going on visually in that setting, but I feel like you needed to give me something to grab on to. Instead my eye wonders homelessly and then falls off the image dissatisfied. I would totally go back to that location though because it's a neat spot that I think you'll get a lot from on a second shoot.

 

[Airborne_Guy]

Sweet thanks for the reply. Here is the unedited shot of the second photo.

What about the position of her head? Any adjustments?
So on the third, maybe some cropping to remove some of the extra stuff that's going on?
Thanks for the feedback!

 

[SageMark]

The shots are fine i guess, lacking something interesting IMHO. 2 is ok with less vignette. Not crazy about any of them though. Keep shootin

 

[Airborne_Guy]

Thanks for all the input!

 

[Karri]

I like the lighting on #1, #2 has too many shadows on the face for me and I think #3 could benefit from some cropping on the right hand side provided that your focus is to be the guy and the main graffiti piece...

 

[Airborne_Guy]

Thanks Karri!

 

[Karri]

Anytime, Airborne Guy!

 

[arcooke]

I like the unedited version of #2 better (except for the zit), though it is a bit underexposed. I also probably would have given her some distance from the wall to blur out some of the texture. That texture sort of bugs me.