#1 the shadows are absolutely terrible and ruin the entire photograph. It looks to be of the same quality you'd expect from an iPhone or point-and-shoot. This could have been corrected with a simple reflector and/or fill flash.
#2 is just a weird angle and is very unflattering to these "plus sized" folks. His shirt takes up a majority of the photograph and is the first thing my eyes notice... I'd like to be able to see their faces better.
In the end, I hope this wasn't a paid session because they are simply no where near the quality of a professional. They are decent as snap-shots but nothing beyond that.