35mm B+W Photo Portfolio

[jcamp1991]

A couple of images from my Photo 1 portfolio.

1

Doren by TheLouisianaJackhammer, on Flickr

2

Kara by TheLouisianaJackhammer, on Flickr

3

Ty by TheLouisianaJackhammer, on Flickr

4

Kody by TheLouisianaJackhammer, on Flickr

5

Kara by TheLouisianaJackhammer, on Flickr

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[BlackSheep]

Too many photos to give proper C&C, but overall not a bad job!

The last two are your weakest shots, IMO - the subject is too centered, and in both I think a vertical crop would have worked much better.

My favourite is the second one.

 

[jcamp1991]

thanks!

 

[Rick Waldroup]

Of all of these, the first and last shots are the best, especially the last shot. The framing and positioning of the young girl in the photo, plus her expression really make it an interesting photo. By leaving it as a horizontal crop and including so much of her surroundings, you have managed to add just a bit of mystery to the shot. Excellent.