6 pics from the last few years.. C&C welcome

[Mikeyb90]

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[spiralout462]

I kinda like #6. Possibly #1. Not much else doing it for me, honestly.

 

[john.margetts]

#1 has a strange vertical white line centre top. I would remove it. I would also move the boat to the right quite a bit.

#2 and #3 I would just delete.

#4 and #5 I would be quite pleased with if I had produced them.

#6 is fairly good. If you are going to desaturate the background you need to remember the grass in the bottom left bubble. The top right bubble needs to be entirely in the frame and it's contents desaturated. With both child and bubbles moving, this is where you need to frame very loosely and then crop in post-processing.

 

[Mikeyb90]

#1 has a strange vertical white line centre top. I would remove it. I would also move the boat to the right quite a bit.

#2 and #3 I would just delete.

#4 and #5 I would be quite pleased with if I had produced them.

#6 is fairly good. If you are going to desaturate the background you need to remember the grass in the bottom left bubble. The top right bubble needs to be entirely in the frame and it's contents desaturated. With both child and bubbles moving, this is where you need to frame very loosely and then crop in post-processing.

With number 6 I desaturated the bubbles originally and thought they looked better with color.. Also it was framed loosely.. Just cropped a bit too much. Will redo when I get home and see if it looks better

 

[Watchful]

delete...lol nice

"#1 has a strange vertical white line centre top. I would remove it. I would also move the boat to the right quite a bit."

that's a contrail, not a strange line.

I like your pics, keep clicking

 

[Mikeyb90]

delete...lol nice

"#1 has a strange vertical white line centre top. I would remove it. I would also move the boat to the right quite a bit."

that's a contrail, not a strange line.

I like your pics, keep clicking

Thank you!