A cold day up here too! (But you guys over in Minnesota are more used to it...). Anyhow, a few important things:
1. The whites appear to be extremely blown out -- especially the slide and snow in the background. I don't really like that effect -- it's distracting.
2. The subject is clearly the swingset and company, but it's almost cut off on the right -- so the whole thing feels unbalanced.
You're always going to have trouble shooting snow AND sky AND bare ground and not having something blow out, but it's often possible to use exposure compensation and photoshop to avoid too much trouble.
In addition, that swingset looks like it has some cool features -- the climbing wall especially. I'd love to see closeups.
Just my 2 cents, value decreasing with my savings!