A day at school.

[Clark]

Here's a "normal" day at Deep Valley highschool. I just thought I'd take out the camera that day after school and take a few shots, and here's what I've got.The photo hoster i used makes me cut the resolution down and make my images all jpeg, so otherwise they have way better detail. So i guess you could just tell me what you think based on composition. Tell me what ya think. Thanks.

[/img]http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2004-12/916473/ashleysfingers_filtered.jpg

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2004-12/916473/blackandwhitecopy.jpg

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2004-12/916473/butterflycopy.jpg

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2004-12/916473/finishedashleywithglasses(Cropped).jpg

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2004-12/916473/IMG_0057_RT8.jpg

 

[Clark]

wow i hope i didnt go through all of that to just let you guys look at some text between the IMG signs....

 

[Aoide]

The image tags look backwards to me. It should be [ img ] hyperlink [ /img ] without the spaces of course.

 

[Canon Fan]

Yep the img tag syntax is the culprit. Flip em around and we'll see your pics

 

[triggerhappy]

Now with fixed links

 

[railman44]

I like 2 and 3 the best. Nice focus. Hope to see more of your work.

 

[Digital Matt]

1 and 2 are great

 

[Clark]

Thanks triggerhappy, ill make sure to do that next time, and hopefully by the time i post some more ill have my own web page so i wont have to make them all so crappy looking. Hehe, i think im getting a mark II for x-mas so my work should be a little better . Merry Christmas to all you guys, thanks for the comments.

 

[JonMikal]

nice work! 1 & 2 do it for me. look forward to more of your posts.

 

[Damian]

tho i'm new in photography, i can really see that you've done a great job with a plain day at school...the 2nd one is the best, real chill, thanks for sharing !!

 

[Xmetal]

4th shot is cool coz of how the girl's eyes are the centrepiece of the image.

 

[ferny]

I think they're all impressive. Nice variation.