Not too bad...few comments...(cute friend by the way)
#1. Left shoulder and parts of the flower are blown out - what do I say...
#2. Slightly out of focus, her face and front should be sharp and they look a little fuzzy - compare with the sharpness of #5...
#3. Not too bad, left side is hidden by the vegetation - not my liking - right hand blends in with the blown out background.
#4. Again, the conversion is not bad, just doesn't seem to be enough contrast - mostly shades of grey - if that is what you were going for then you got it.
#5. Not bad - reasonable bokeh, but I am not a fan of this tight cropping - would have been nice to see all of her resting on the grass.
These are just the things that I noticed, others may have different comments. HTH.
Cheers,
WesternGuy