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Raian-san

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I just shot this with my friend for fun and a birthday I just did.

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Can't leave this without a video...Watch it in HD. Enjoy!

 
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I really like #2. Definitely my favorite. What is the color grading you did on that one?
 
Not too bad...few comments...(cute friend by the way)

#1. Left shoulder and parts of the flower are blown out - what do I say...
#2. Slightly out of focus, her face and front should be sharp and they look a little fuzzy - compare with the sharpness of #5...
#3. Not too bad, left side is hidden by the vegetation - not my liking - right hand blends in with the blown out background.
#4. Again, the conversion is not bad, just doesn't seem to be enough contrast - mostly shades of grey - if that is what you were going for then you got it.
#5. Not bad - reasonable bokeh, but I am not a fan of this tight cropping - would have been nice to see all of her resting on the grass.

These are just the things that I noticed, others may have different comments. HTH.

Cheers,

WesternGuy
 
I really like #2. Definitely my favorite. What is the color grading you did on that one?

Contrast +59, Vibrance +38, Saturation -52. Clarity +40. Colors 7862, Highlighth -3, Dark -24, shadows -24

This photoshoot is for her make up blog so a lot of close up shots to show make up.

Thanks for the comments. I rarely even do photos anymore, I'm a video guy but of course I still do photos every now and then. It was a last minute thing to do the photoshoot, I'm pretty happy with the results though. Of course it's not professional like other people. I'm still trying to improve with Photos! :thumbup:
 
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