1. Nice detail
2. Looks like is straight outta 1994. Sorry. For a "detail" shot, you gotta pay attention to the details like removing the pollon thats all over the ring.
3. Great shot
4. It's okay. color balance is a different on different parts of the cake. Not a huge fan of the processing as when its in an album it would look out of place. It doesn't fit with the set.
5. Very awkward crop. I'm not sure it should have made the cut.
6. I like this - wish her expression was a bit different, but it is what it is. a portrait orientation would have been better.
7. Again, the processing doesn't fit with the set at all. Bad angle, bad crop, not a keeper in my books.
8. Its okay. Mic is distracting.
9. Cropped too tight.
10. Cropped too tight. And the reflection makes it a junker.
I know you said they client asked for a close crop (which I doubt, but whatever. But thats why you can shoot wider and crop appropriately. You have to be the one who knows whats right and shoot to the right standards. You are the professional getting paid, so you should deliver them a useful file and educate them on why you shot it if need be.