#5 is the best of the bunch I think. #3 is good too, though both could have used a bit more light on the person.
#1 being able to see the ceiling really ruins this shot for me, as well as the fact that I can see some haloing around the guy where it looks like you've dodged it.
#2 Has poor lighting and is underexposed; I also think the framing is too tight here.
Thanks for the critique! I wish I had more room to work with, we did this shoot in my tiny apartment, which is why I decided to do pretty extreme angles that led to the ceiling being in view I'm still working on using my lighting as efficiently as possible practice makes perfect