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Here's some photos I took of my kids in the studio tonight at school... I know there are some issues and I will try to mention those that I already know with each photo, but if you notice anything else, please let me know :)

1. Main issue here is that I cut through "Radio Flyer" and the wheels on the wagon...
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2. Main thing I notice here is that the catch lights in his eyes are minimal. I tried to brighten them up a little in post, but a couple other little spots were coming up and he looked really freaky... lol
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3. Her face is a little too bright and I'd like to see the blacks a little blacker...
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4. His face may be a little bright and the shadow being as dark as it is bugs me a little... Better catch lights in his eyes here though.
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I also know that in all of these, the background isn't white. I was only allowed to use one light for this assignment with a shutter speed of 1/25s and aperture of f/8 or f/11. This is what I ended up with as the best of the best :)

That's all I can think of to throw in here :) In all the pictures, the strobe was at camera right. In the one of my daughter, and the one where my son is jumping with his guitar, the bottom of the softbox was about 18" off the ground. Used a large softbox (don't know the actual dimensions, but it was huge!). Strobe was about 18" from subjects as well. In the picture of my son sitting with his guitar and the picture of him in the wagon, the flash was about 7' high and about a foot back from the end of the backdrop...
 
#4 is epic.

If you can adjust the skin tones a bit more in 4, his faces almost looks porcelain.

I know!!!! I think that's my fave of him :) The one of my daughter was my favorite of her from the night even after I got tons of her twirling in her ballet skirt lol. I just LOVE how sharp I was able to get her eyes :)
 
Good work. :thumbsup:

#1 I wish you didn't cut off the wheels...
#2 I think I'd like this better as a landscape orientation...
#3 Again... I'd like to see her whole body in the frame...
#4 Awesome! My favorite.
 
On #3 she was too close to me for me to get all of her in the frame without having the edges of the background in it :/ Same with #2, if I open up the crop and go landscape, I end up with junk from "behind the scenes" in the shot :/
 
Her eyes look like she should be in the movie twilight in number 3!
 
Her eyes look like she should be in the movie twilight in number 3!

but aren't they sooo perfect :) LOL

I'm uber impressed with myself, so my comments may be incomprehensible tonight... I'll be looking at these with fresh eyes in the morning and may be able to find more flaws :) lol
 
either you did some saturation or those kids have some very colorful eyes. even in the other photos i think its too much......subtle changes are the key to good portrait pp
 
my son's eyes are ice blue...

My daughter's eyes a just slightly over saturated, but in the photo they are really only a tiny bit lighter in color than they really are... They both have VERY beautiful eyes... I'm biased obviously, but still... lol
 
my son's eyes are ice blue...

My daughter's eyes a just slightly over saturated, but in the photo they are really only a tiny bit lighter in color than they really are... They both have VERY beautiful eyes... I'm biased obviously, but still... lol

That's cool. when my son was born he had those ice blue eyes, i didn't have to touch the color in them, now they have turned more of a grey, so I photoshop in a little extra blue...;)
 
These are neat!

I think the skin is a lil over softened in all of them. I don't think your daughter's face is too bright either.

Shadow doesn't bother me in #4 cause he's just too stinkin' cute!
 
All nice shots but as someone mentioned, too bad the wheels was cut off in #1...
 

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