A small amateur photoshoot in Pune, India.

[neneaniket]

Lately after i acquired my Olympus E - 510 from a friend alongwith the 70-300 telephoto, we formed a small group and have started going on photoshoots....or practice photoshoots as we call them, because we are still learning and have to still learn a lot....

On one of these shoots, we went to Pashan Lake, a lake near Pune. Unfortunately the lake did not have enough hiding place as we learnt later, is utmost necessary ! Neverthless, posting a few snaps i clicked.....

Oh and yes, this is my first post here !

 

[Vespa]

Nice shot. I would crop off most of the bak round and focus more on the main subject

 

[Robin Usagani]

I like it the way it is.

 

[Trever1t]

very creamy background! :thumbup:

 

[FoggyLens]

Welcome. Love the background but not sure Im loving the composition. Thanks for sharing.

 

[Robin Usagani]

well.. i take that back. You need to clone out that black spot at bottom right underneath the leaf.

 

[neneaniket]

Thanks everyone......guys, am still learning....your views and replies are helping me to compose better, and shoot better ! i am uploading a few more now

 

[HikinMike]

Thanks everyone......guys, am still learning....your views and replies are helping me to compose better, and shoot better ! i am uploading a few more now

Welcome!

I don't care for the first image. It's too cluttered for me. Maybe getting closer to the subject?

I like the second one. Is that some type of Kingfisher? Maybe a crop some of the top and left?

Like the last one too. Maybe crop about 1/4 from the top?