A Snail

[AlanE]

OM2N Zuiko 50 mm Ilford 125 FP Plus TMAX Dev 1:4 8 min @ 68 degrees


A Snail by Nokinrocks, on Flickr


R3-E081 negative by Nokinrocks, on Flickr

 

[DorkSterr]

I really like this! Im not to sure about the PP it makes me think of an Instagram photo...

 

[AlanE]

Dorkster - I appreciate the comment. I will add the neg, as scanned, so you can see the difference....

 

[Mike Lamb]

I like them both but #1 much better. Crop a little off the top and right. There's this pretty nature with a zit thing that is attractive to me.
There's some speckles you should get rid of.

 

[AlanE]

Thanks for the comment Mike....

 

[PixelRabbit]

I've looked at these a couple times now and I really like the first one! I like the subtlety of it.
Somehow the subject gets lost for me in the second and I'm not sure how I would fix it.

 

[AlanE]

I agree with your critique PixelRabbit. Thanks for taking a look.