A Sunrise for C&C.....

[colnago1331]

Got out this morning and managed to catch this. Would be interested in hearing people's thoughts.....

 

[afoto]

I really love it! I like that you didn't brighten it up to much.

The only thing I would change is fixing a bit of the distortion. I like the distortion in the leaves and branches, but I would like to see the trunks standing completely vertical.

 

[mmaria]

for me, it's nice but I would slightly change the composition. Here you have two trees with almost the same significance and two behind them... even numbers aren't that pleasant in composing.

but... jmo

 

[Parker219]

^ Did she just say " even numbers aren't that pleasant in composing"? :scratch:

 

[Parker219]

I really like the details in the trees. Yes, I would fix the distortion a little, so the trees are standing nice and straight.

Its nice to look at though!

 

[mmaria]

^ Did she just say " even numbers aren't that pleasant in composing"? :scratch:

yeah I did... but considering that English is my second language, could you suggest a better way for making the sentence?

 

[snowbear119 50]

^ Did she just say " even numbers aren't that pleasant in composing"? :scratch:

yeah I did... but considering that English is my second language, could you suggest a better way for making the sentence?

I know exactly what you meant

Perhaps "even numbers aren't that pleasing in a composition."

colnago1331: I like this. It does seem a bit "heavy" to the right, but there really isn't much you can do about that. I do find the bright cloud streak between the tops of the two main trees a bit distracting, though.

 

[mmaria]

^ Did she just say " even numbers aren't that pleasant in composing"? :scratch:

yeah I did... but considering that English is my second language, could you suggest a better way for making the sentence?

I know exactly what you meant

Perhaps "even numbers aren't that pleasing in a composition."

snowbear, thank you for rescuing me in a nice way :hug:: From now on , I'll let you do the talking

 

[Parker219]

It wasn't HOW you said it, it was the fact that I have never heard that even numbers is not pleasing before. I didn't mean anything bad by it, It was just an ODD statement to me...pun intended. lol

 

[colnago1331]

Thanks for the C&C everyone. So I tried futzing with it briefly last night and bringing the trees to vertical results in them getting cut off at the top, something I clearly don't want to do. I'll try again tonight and see what I can get or if it can be cropped differently.

Also, I think I understand what mmaria is trying to say - even numbers are kinda blah. There's a certain boring symmetry to even numbers. And I don't necessarily disagree.