Abandon

[colnago1331]

Had to drive to Pittsburgh for work yesterday. Took the long, scenic route home and found this old, abandoned barn off the road. As always, c&c welcome.....

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[tirediron]

Not bad; nice subject matter, but would benefit from a slight exposure increase I think.

 

[Mully]

Nice but open up the mid values and they will look better.

 

[O'Rork]

Very nice. Really spooky.

 

[KenC]

I second the comment about the mid-tones, but my other objection is that all of the images have too much sky, too much foreground, or both. The barn is really interesting, so get closer and exclude the other stuff.

 

[PropilotBW]

The second photo is your best shot.
I don't care for the distortion in the 3rd photo; although, the ivy is very cool. The pic would have looked nice from a distance using a telephoto zoom.

 

[colnago1331]

Okay, so here's #2 (also my favorite and, IMHO, clearly the best of the three) with the midtones upped and cropped to exclude more foreground.....

 

[colnago1331]

And here's #1 cropped with the midtones upped.....