Aga and Karolina :)

[michakac]

Hello again!

Aga:

1:

2:

3:

Karolina:

4:

5:

6:

Thanks for comments and advices

 

[LuckySe7en]

I really like 1&2. #3 looks too processed. That's probably the effect you were after.
The rest I don't really like. Karolina is just not as into it as Aga

 

[mommy-medic]

Excellent set! I like the 1st color one where you see a hint of her dimple. The only critique I would have is that in the first set her hair looks too straight and organized to pull off the "disheveled" look, yet the tangles indicate that may have been the look you were after? I'm not sure how to explain what I mean other than it should be either combed or really disheveled, and the stray tangles in the straight hair seem conflicting. I hope that doesn't sound trivial- it caught my eye.

 

[kelbow]

I think the success in the first three photos is that you've stepped back from your subject and allowed for some compositional breathing room. I get more of a sense of environment in the Aga photo. She looks more comfortable in this area and it's interesting to look at. Your DOF in them make Aga the center of attention and the background bokeh adds to the elegance of the photos.

The reason why the Karolina photos aren't as successful is because the top of her head is cut off in all of them and her background is uninteresting. Though there are definitely shadows and highlights in the photos, her skin tone and hair color blend with that background shade too well. It's very flat for that reason.