Alice in Wonderschool

[Arhy]

My first experience in the portraits.
... mm.. I like to make photos so much..)) However, most of all I like the process of making pictures..
My friend:

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2

3

4

5

mm.. her eyes...!

Your opinion?
Danke =)

 

[LongDucDong]

#s 1, 2 & 5 are the ones that really stand out. I like the color in #1, but I think the FG can be cropped some more, the drawing on the desk is a bit distracting.

 

[newrmdmike]

mmmmmm eyes is right!

my only beef is the contrast in 2,3,and 4

the coloration is nice, but the contrast is lacking a little.

 

[Sebastian]

I really like picture number 1. Why?: The pose and the idea is very good, but...
If you let her ware a walkman, don`t cut it of. It`s a good idea to shoot this kind of photo with it, so let it "safe". Change the image formation if you can and see how it looks like...

 

[Icon72]

I like number 2 myself. She has a very nice face. Well proportioned, pretty. She is easy to look at and somewhat calming as well. Good job.

 

[EJBPhoto]

1 is lovely except that the WB is really off

 

[WVPhotoGuy]

Great series of shots...The 4th one is my favorite.

 

[ShootHoops]

I like #4 and #5.

 

[Darksyde]

#1 and #4 look great. She's beautiful

 

[fstop23]

love #1... very natural pose and i think the colors are great. her face looks distorted in #2. her expression in #s 3 and 4 looks forced.

And she has pretty eyes.

 

[fotophia]

Im not really keen on any of then bar #1. I actually really like the off WB in #1. Reminds me of country-side summer lighting lol. and that slight flare at the top I really like (unless my eyes are decieving me). I think it could be better cropped since shes wearing headphone things and work with it. But overall its a lovely natural looking shot And she has wounderful eyes!

 

[gizmo2071]

Number 1 - I like the most. Not a standard position for a portrait, which I like.
I wouldn't have guessed the White balance being off, I'd have guessed that you adjusted the red and blues tones?.... and I like it. Tho her pupil looks odd in the one eye.

as newrmdmike said - " my only beef is the contrast in 2,3,and 4,
the coloration is nice, but the contrast is lacking a little."

Number 5 - I like the crop and composition. Her looking away gives me a sense of day dreaming (which fits perfectly with "alice in wonderschool" )