All Aboard!? C&C Anyone?

[Bugs81]

Took these shots (among others) this weekend while visiting some family on Long Island.

Any C&C would be greatly appreciated as always.

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[Tulsa]

With B&W I think people sometimes think a photo has more potential than it really does, I like to think what the picture would look like in color, if it would look like any other snapshot, its nothing great.
Thats how I feel about this picture, while it looks decent in B&W there is alot going on.

The first one draws me to the W, but its not the main point of this photo. I am all for landscape pictures, but there should be a main focal point.

The second one I like even less. You could lower the camera to the tracks and do the cliche shot of camera sitting in center of tracks looking into the distance.

I hope that can be helpful to you.

 

[Bugs81]

Points taken Tulsa, thank you for the C&C.

 

[bazooka]

I agree with Tulsa, there's nothing striking about these.