Am I on the right track yet??

[CaboWabo]

I am new and still learning about how it all works , I see the extreme is not favorable so I am trying to calm down and make it right please give me some feed back about what I have done right or wrong . I have used the auto bracket on my nikon d50 -2 0 +2 and photoshop cs2 with topaz and also Photomatix 4 pro. Here is a Bugatti Veyron EB I shot I was lucky enough to be able to shoot it . Thanks for any help I am really trying to learn about all this I am just not understanding just yet

 

[Kerbouchard]

The first seems like it is tilted for no reason and the second seams out of focus.

What are you trying to convey in these photos? Do you think these photos give a viewer the sense of awe that you were in when you were walking around the car?

 

[EPPhoto]

Why is 1 tilted? In 2 watch where you make your focal point. Basically same thoughts as previous comment asked.

 

[CaboWabo]

Thanks for the feedback the tilted was just an idea , I see everyones shots straight on or full view just trying to be different on the view .

 

[Kerbouchard]

Thanks for the feedback the tilted was just an idea , I see everyones shots straight on or full view just trying to be different on the view .

Sometimes different is great, but often times, being different just to be different is not.

In any case, you posted two photos, both of which I would consider detail and supplementary to the main photos. In this thread, you didn't give us any main photos...those that are pulled back and showed us the entire car. Those that showed us the engineering and design that went into the vehicle, those that showed us what sets this car apart from the other. You mentioned in your first post that you felt lucky to be able to photograph this particular car, and yet, in these photos, I see a hood emblem and an engine...Neither seem to express the joy that you felt in photographing them.

Next time, take a step back, figure out what makes the subject special to you, and make sure you capture that in your frame. Just my .02.

 

[patrick0294]

In #1 the reflections off the body are really distracting. Especially the right side.

 

[CaboWabo]

Thanks for all the help I guess I have alot of work to do and understand good thing this is not my job or looks like I would be fired . thanks again