Amanda

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Nikon D7000
0.005 sec (1/200)
f/8.0
45 mm
Lens 24.0-70.0 mm f/2.8
 
The only thing I'm not super crazy about is the placement of her right arm. I think it's blocking a lot of great detail on her dress (the open back) and it looks sort of awkward. Other than that, I love it. =) Although, I'm a total noob. lol So I don't really know what I'm talking about...
 
Definitely agree with the point on the right arm.
The rest of the body and legs all fall within a certain range of distance from the lens. Which means they are sort of on the same plane. Then you have the right elbow sticking out towards the lens. Right now there isn't enough contrast to define the difference in distance, but I don't know if you want it to have too much definition because it will become even more of a distraction. May be she should have moved her elbow backwards more.
 

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