Another Image for C&C - Wintery, Sunny, Cold

[skwty]

Thanks for all the input about images I have shared. I take notes on the your comments, unless you are telling me what "should" be in the photo

Here is another one that I think I did ok with, I was just wondering what you guys though of the comp, colors, focus, etc. Thanks.


Wire in Branch by sukosaki, on Flickr

 

[480sparky]

I can only assume your 'subject' is the ice on the wire/rope. If so, I would say you need to get closer and crop a lot tighter. Lots.

The sun on the right keeps drawing my eye there, and the dark branch is overwhelming.

But you did good with the OOF background and capturing the sunlight in the ice!

 

[skwty]

Thanks for the input. To be honest, i did not see the ice "sparkle" until after. The wire/rope is the subject (defining a subject before photo is something I need to work on), now that you pointed it out. This is uncropped altogether, but I am going to edit it and see what I get.

 

[lyonsroar]

Need a discernable subject. Needs to not be centered

 

[skwty]

Need a discernable subject. Needs to not be centered

Ok. I appreciate your time to look things over. How about this crop?


Another crop by sukosaki, on Flickr