Another wife portrait

[enzodm]

It is like I'm shooting the hairdresser work... (just after, it is the time my wife is more easy on being photographed).
She is against a window with tent (not directly hit by sun); I wrongly supposed to obtain some hair light from it, but on the other side it is a good background (should I delete the two tent horizontal lines?). Flash on left, and a white reflector/diffuser on right, low. Ambient light too.

 

[SpeedTrap]

You should get rid of the lines on the background, they do take away from the image.
I like this photo, good lighting and a strong connection with the subject.
One of the only improvements I could offer is to change the crop, it seems like she is too far to the right, too much open space on the left.

 

[enzodm]

Thank you SpeedTrap, regarding crop I tried to have her eyes on top third. I'll try some other crop, but before I'll delete tent lines (I'm lazy ).

 

[ZacFreeland]

Perhaps a different shirt would make the image more appealing. No offense.

 

[enzodm]

Zac: it is indeed a very nice shirt, although before shooting I wondered about all those lines. However I recognize in the picture is not as good as in reality .