Any better than last time?

[amomenttintimephoto]

I've read up on composition and the exposure triangle. I even tried shooting in RAW.

#1

#2

#3

Thanks!

 

[KmH]

They are not well separated from the backgrounds, light wise, and the couple just does not 'pop'.

In #1 he is in front of green foliage, she is in front of a brick wall. It almost looks like 2 photos jammed together. Why did you tilt the camera? What does the tilt do for the photo? His face is quite dark.

What does the right half of #2 do for the photo, beside make them smaller in the image ?

I would recommend keeping a closer eye on the backgrounds and learning more about photographic lighting.

 

[willis_927]

The tilt ruined the 1st picture IMO.... It actually makes me feel a little dizzy.

 

[RauschPhotography]

Like others have mentioned, in #1 the tilt is really unnecessary. Not sure if it's me, but it seems a little soft. Were you focusing on their faces or elsewhere? #2 doesn't do anything for me--the color scheme really sets it back, maybe playing around with it will make it pop a little bit more. #3's WB is off--compare the girl's shirt color to your font, and you can tell the WB is cooler than it should be. Anyways, can't say that these are better than last time (I hadn't seen the post before, so I don't really have much to compare to), but keep shooting!

 

[Lovelace]

I'd try to bring out the couple a little more, like others said. They blend too easily with the background. Also, the male model needs to be more expressive. He's barely smiling at all in 1, he looks bored in 2, and in 3 it looks like there's something on the girl's face that's really bugging him. Not to be mean, that's just what I noticed. I'm being nit-picky. They are lovely photos, they just need some small adjustments.