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Joel_W

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Took a few HDR images on my last outing to one of the Arboretums here on Long Island to better handle some really contrasty scenics. All the pictures are 3 picture HDR images of -2/0/+2. CC's more then welcomed.


$RV9KTIJ by jaw101, on Flickr


$RYITUG6 by jaw101, on Flickr


$R5M0QUK by jaw101, on Flickr
 
The trees in the third have halos, and I wonder what these would have looked like as a single exposure, maybe with a polariser. The first and second lead me to believe you could have achieved the same in that manner :scratch: ... but then I know next to nothing about HDR, so my words don't count very much.
 
The trees in the third have halos, and I wonder what these would have looked like as a single exposure, maybe with a polariser. The first and second lead me to believe you could have achieved the same in that manner :scratch: ... but then I know next to nothing about HDR, so my words don't count very much.

LaFoto, thanks for your positive comments. I keep on looking for those pesky halos, but I don't see them on my screen. While I don't have a polariser filter I do have a few Graded ND filters. I guess if I wasn't so intent on going the HDR route, I should have tried that route as well.
 
Joel, you a good guy and I hate to deliver bad feedback but these are not working. They all are to flat the third not as much but 1 and 2, there is not separation between he that big right bush/tree thing and the background.


The first one is busy and lacks depth. Composition is not bad but I think a little further back to get a little more foreground would have been better and you would not have been so tight to that deep pink bush/tree. Its slightly cutt off. Sometimes people say over processed and in this case I would say way under processed, You need more blacks and I think a lower F would have been better.

the second one greens are off between number 1 and 2. I similar advices as above. The green bush just blends into the Pine trees on the top right and the the green foliage on the left. I probably would have cloned out those yellow flowers/weeds on the lower right part as I think it is distracting and I keep looking there.

3 is your better one IMOP but there is some haloing going on in the trees which can be fixed its minute. I think you would have benefited from getting further back or tighter in. I am not crazy about the distance. I think with the framing you have space on both sides of those trees that keeps me wondering off the photo. I would like to see more. So a wider lens would have been great if you do not have one than a few steps back would have worked OR you could have used those two main trees and got tighter in so they framed the picture.


Hope this helps!
 
Vipgraphx, that's for the honest CC and feedback. I'll rework my images and try for better processing, especially the blacks, then re-crop and see what I can do.

I was frustrated with the original results, and I guess I just plain fooled myself that I managed to fix them.
 

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