Arroyo High School Of El Monte (comment them)

[UUilliam]

the glitter ruins the limages, stop using the glitter as glitter text = .gif image = lower quality

 

[ocular]

Well, except for the very last picture you need to focus more on your subjects. #1 needs less people in the bg or blured. #3 is ok, but we don't need to see the pickup truck or the gang on the right; it's very distracting. #4 I would capture from the left instead of dead on. #5 I would shoot the students like a railroad track, I donno, it's late.